I was a student at Hay Park School and this blog is where I shared my learning.
Wednesday, September 5, 2018
Wild thing description
Kia Ora World,
Today I am going to be showing you my wild thing description that I did in class today
and how would my wild creature looked like
Here is my wild thing description.......
Dear Gloria, I really liked your wild things writing it had a lot of demonstration and I liked your drawing of it. Your wild things writing had a lot of information and the background was also pretty too. I really liked how you were describing the wild things because then it gives me more detail even though there is a picture of the wild thing on the other side.
Dear Gloria,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your wild things writing it had a lot of demonstration and I liked your drawing of it. Your wild things writing had a lot of information and the background was also pretty too. I really liked how you were describing the wild things because then it gives me more detail even though there is a picture of the wild thing on the other side.
Your sincerely:Nevaeh
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